Posted by: Jack Henry | December 16, 2016

Editor’s Corner: 12 Days of English – Day 7

On the seventh day of English

My true love gave to me

Seven wordy phrases that

You can change with ease.

These lovely revised phrases come from the book Comma Sutra, by Laurie Rozakis, Ph.D. (p. 224).

Wordy Revised
at this point in time now
for the purpose of for
in the event that if
because of the fact that because
due to the fact that because
weather event rain, sleet, snow, etc.
experience some discomfort hurt

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